Me and my buddy- Jorja- made a story one sentence than another. We were not allowed speak to each other, no contact at all. We have a video of our draft back. Next time we could work on not talking so much but we did have a fun time and loved writing this story.
Thursday, August 8, 2019
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I am a student at Gisborne Intermediate. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Kia ora Tegan. Sounds like this activity would have been a lot of fun. A few weeks ago I had to work with a friend online which is kind of like what you were doing. It was challenging! Could you try to embed your 'draft back' or a screencast to give me a better idea of what you story was about. Ka rāwe Tegan and Jorja!
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